Essential Guide to Writing a Novel

Episode 199 - Writing a scene with many people and lots of motion.

Essential Guide to Writing a Novel

Show Notes

Sometimes in our story we'll have a scene filled with people where everyone is moving all at once, such as a battle scene or mob scene or festival scene or street scene. Here are techniques on crafting the scene so there's no confusion so readers can focus on the hero. Also, what is the rule of exceptions? And, can something bad happening to us make us better writers? Support the show Buy the master class.

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