Act Two Podcast

Note Behind the Note Series || Decoding "What's Your Series?" and "You Should Start Your Story Later"

Act Two Podcast

Show Notes

Hosts Tasha Huo and Josh Hallman discuss two real-life notes given to a TV writer: "After reading your pilot, I don't know what your series is about" and "You should start your story later". What do those notes actually mean and how do you address them?

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