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DZ-127: Secrets and Clues 2 - The Cost of Revelation

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Show Notes

Listen to learn the emotional impact of revealing secrets vs discovering them.

In this episode Stu, Chas and Mel apply the Landmark–Hidden–Secret framework (from DZ-126) across two very different genres: the thriller SIDE EFFECTS (2013) and the tragicomic pilot of SHRINKING.

SIDE EFFECTS is a film of two genres. The first half plays as a drama about depression and over-medication; the second half is a 90s thriller. We talk about how every time Dr Jonathan Banks uncovers a new piece of information, it puts him in danger — and that danger motivates him to uncover more.

In SHRINKING, we see a different use of the framework. "What are psychologists but detectives of the mind?" Rather than the cost of finding secrets, it's about the cost of sharing them. Chas also comes out of this with a paradigm he's been building toward (but we're keeping what that is secret until you listen!)

And inevitably we go on some tangents: whether SIDE EFFECTS should even have been an erotic thriller!

As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.

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"Every time Dr Jonathan Banks uncovers a new piece of information, it puts him in danger -- and that danger motivates him to uncover more." — Chas Fisher @ 00:26:04

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CHAPTERS

00:00:00 – Cold Open

00:00:16 – Intro: Secrets and Clues 2 - the Cost of Revelation

00:01:03 – Previously on Secrets and Clues (Recap of Part 1)

00:04:24 – Flashforward Insights

00:09:29 – SIDE EFFECTS

00:20:18 – › The First Half: Push and Misdirection

00:28:41 – › Genre Shift: Banks Becomes the Detective

00:48:06 – SHRINKING

01:00:02 – › The Inverted Paradigm: When Everyone Knows

01:07:47 – › The Cost of Sharing

01:22:02 – › Power Through Honest Acknowledgement

01:35:37 – The Key Tool Chas Learned

01:39:28 – Key Learnings & Wrap Up

01:50:48 – Many Thanks to our Patrons!

FILMS

SIDE EFFECTS (2013) — (w) Scott Z Burns (d) Steven Soderbergh

SHOWS

SHRINKING — (w) Brett Goldstein, Jason Segel, Bill Lawrence

SCRIPTS

Study the script: SIDE EFFECTS (2013) — Scott Z Burns

LINKS

Website: DIY & dragons: Landmark, Hidden, Secret

Website: The Alexandrian » Advanced Node-Based Design

Website: Ascii Dreams: The Quest for Quests (Part One)

Website: Ascii Dreams: The Quest for Quests (Part Two)

EPISODES IN THE SECRETS AND CLUES SERIES

DZ-126: Secrets and Clues

DZ-127: Secrets and Clues 2 - The Cost of Revelation

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