
Show Notes
Listen to understand how to dramatize a character's internal change.
Welcome to our third entry in our character arc series; and the first where we talk about characters that actually change. And positively, too.
We deep dive into BARBIE, WIDOWS and ALL OF US STRANGERS to work out what makes an arc feel positive -- even if the film itself is heartbreaking. All three films are "positive arcs" that feel wildly different. We speculate whether that's due to the nature of the relationship questions, the use of additive/subtractive rewards; and whether it's do with the connection of the characters needs and their goals.
We further crystalize two tools we've been kicking around:
The relationship question — take a character question ("will she learn to connect?") and pose it as a relationship problem ("will these two grow closer or further apart?").
Additive vs subtractive rewards — We continue buildling on this idea from our Steadfast episodes. Does the story give the character something or take something away? And is that a good or a bad thing?
And Mel brings up a third:
Repeating a beat from a different angle so we can trace a character's gradual evolution.
We also debate whether Barbie's void scene is a producer's note personified — a director going into the endless nothing to spell the themes out one more time.
All this and more on DZ-130!
As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.
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"A relationship question is taking what we think is an internal question about a character and defining it in terms of the relationship. Will Moana grow closer to their village coming back or will they'll grow further apart?" — Stu Willis @ 00:06:09
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CHAPTERS
00:00:00 – Cold Open
00:00:21 – Positive Character Arcs
00:04:47 – › Relationship questions as the key to dramatizing arcs
00:09:00 – Followup Questions
00:12:12 – Zero Context Insights
00:13:01 – BARBIE
00:17:16 – › The void scene with Barbie's creator
00:23:13 – › Immortality versus death as the real choice
00:27:02 – › Debating the lie the character believes
00:44:26 – › Gain versus loss framing the ending
00:52:34 – › Contrast and affinity
00:59:47 – WIDOWS
01:05:47 – › Establishing character patterns before the heist begins
01:09:37 – › Do the widows have values before the story starts
01:18:42 – › Skills and goals tightly tied to character growth
01:21:04 – › Alice's escalating value shift through the sugar daddy scene
01:25:04 – › Linda's grief scene and steadfast versus positive arcs
01:27:12 – › Veronica's arc through Harry's betrayal and revenge
01:39:33 – › Comparing ensemble arcs to OCEAN'S ELEVEN and THE TOWN
01:46:46 – › Relationship questions as emotional engine of ensemble films
01:49:36 – ALL OF US STRANGERS
01:55:38 – › Rebuffing Harry sets up the positive arc
02:02:15 – › Isolation to connectedness as the emotional throughline
02:07:24 – › Contrasting coming out scenes with mom and dad
02:11:26 – › The low point as emotional violence not distance
02:18:48 – › Dream logic and touch as physical arc tracking
02:23:20 – Key Learnings & Wrap Up
02:26:20 – › Additive versus subtractive rewards in character arcs
02:29:58 – › Patreon shoutouts and next episode preview
FILMS
BARBIE (2023) — (w) Noah Baumbach, Greta Gerwig (d) Greta Gerwig
WIDOWS (2018) — (w) Gillian Flynn, Steve Mcqueen (d) Steve Mcqueen
ALL OF US STRANGERS (2023) — (w) Andrew Haigh, Taichi Yamada (d) Andrew Haigh
SCRIPTS
Study the script: BARBIE (2023) — Noah Baumbach, Greta Gerwig
Study the script: ALL OF US STRANGERS (2023) — Andrew Haigh, Taichi Yamada
SHOT ZERO DEEP DIVES
What You Don't See: WIDOWS
Frames within Frames: AL
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Teaser for our next episode: DZ-130. Please watch BARBIE, WIDOWS, and ALL OF US STRANGERS so you can learn about positive character arcs.
Listen to learn how to move an audience with a character who never changes.
Listen to separate the three layers of an arc -- does the character change? How do they feel about it? And how is the audience positioned to feel about it?
Listen to learn the emotional impact of revealing secrets vs discovering them.
Listen if you want to understand how hidden information drives character motivation and plot structure!