
Show Notes
Listen if you want to explore how you can make your creative hand visible through meta-storytelling and structural choices!?!
In our final (ha!) episode looking at Talking Directly to the Audience, we turn away from character-and-text based craft tools to look at other ways that filmmakers - whether they be directors, writers, editors, or anyone else - can make the audience feel their 'hand' more. To that end, Mel, Stu and Chas dive into ADAPTATION, STORIES WE TELL and THE FORTY-YEAR-OLD VERSION.
We discuss structure (in particular how to structure more meta stories), the influence of TikTok and YouTube in portraying character authenticity, how to set up scenes where your characters can actually debate what your story is really about., and get into the gritty of where "in the story world" the communication from the filmmakers is.
Ultimately, in exploring these three powerful films through this lens, we discover that these tools give filmmakers more control in conveying their theme. Quelle surprise.
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"I would guess that some of the most watched content in the world has people talking directly to the camera and that's stuff that people watch on YouTube." — Stu Willis @ 00:06:13
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CHAPTERS
00:00:00 – Cold Open
00:00:28 – The Meta of Meta
00:04:20 – › How filmmakers speak without breaking immersion
00:07:48 – › Mapping the craft levers for filmmaker-to-audience communication
00:11:01 – ADAPTATION
00:14:11 – › How filmmakers communicate through diegetic versus direct address
00:20:30 – › When fiction blurs with reality in meta-storytelling
00:29:23 – › Structural devices versus overt meta-communication across all three films
00:34:28 – › What the work wants from its audience
00:36:43 – Sponsor: Arc Studio Pro
00:39:40 – Adaption (Part 2)
00:42:23 – STORIES WE TELL
00:44:24 – › Exposing the apparatus of documentary filmmaking
00:49:44 – › Reconstructed Super 8 footage and the ethics of misdirection
00:57:07 – › Sarah Polley's absence as subject and presence as author
01:07:55 – › Mapping diegetic control across the film's storytelling layers
01:12:13 – THE FORTY YEAR OLD VERSION
01:19:29 – › Black-and-white cinematography and the Woody Allen inversion
01:23:13 – › Locating the filmmaker's voice on the meta-storytelling spectrum
01:33:20 – › Extracting portable craft techniques from autobiographical filmmaking
01:43:39 – › Authenticity, truth, and what each film is ultimately arguing
01:48:14 – Wrap Up & Key Learnings
01:50:48 – › Black-and-white, artifice, and meta-techniques as thematic anchors
01:56:27 – › Sound design, structural play, and further viewing recommendations
02:01:24 – Many thanks to our Patreons <3
FILMS
ADAPTATION (2002) — (w) Charlie Kaufman, Susan Orlean (d) Spike Jonze
STORIES WE TELL (2012) — (w) Sarah Polley
THE FORTY-YEAR-OLD VERSION (2020) — (w) Radha Blank
EPISODES IN THE TALKING DIRECTLY TO THE AUDIENCE SERIES
DZ-109: Talking DIRECTLY to your audience
DZ-110: Voiceover
DZ-111: Unreliable Narrators and FIGHT CLUB
DZ-112: Breaking the 4th wall
DZ-113: Tools For Filmmakers To Talk To The Audience
RELATED EPISODES
DZ-53: Antagonists! 5 - vs Audience
DZ-109: Talking DIRECTLY to your audience
DZ-110: Voiceover
DZ-111: Unreliable Narrators and FIGHT CLUB
DZ-112: Breaking the 4th wall
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