
Show Notes
Listen to make your scene writing more dynamic (by looking at the underlying game)
Stu and Chas turn their attention to a topic that has long eluded them: the game of the scene. We look at how considering the game that characters are playing — its rules, arenas, players, referees, and win conditions — can help you write more dynamic scenes.
This will be a two-parter, and for this half, we talk BLUEY, “The Quiet Game” (from Season 2) and “Phones” (from Season 3), and JOHN WICK 4. We also touch on GAME NIGHT and LIFE OF BRIAN.
Thanks to Chris Walker for editing this episode.
As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.
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"So I think there's the referees, there's the arena, the victory conditions important and it leads into this other idea, speaking of board games, of like the path to victory." — Stu Willis @ 00:09:44
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CHAPTERS
00:00:00 – Cold Open
00:00:18 – Sponsor: ScriptUp
00:01:52 – Intro: What do we mean by Game of the Scene?
00:15:06 – THE LIFE OF BRIAN: "WHAT HAVE THE ROMANS EVER DONE FOR US?"
00:20:03 – BLUEY
00:23:22 – › How the quiet game's rules create scene power dynamics
00:29:33 – › PHONES: learning the rules to change the game
00:35:08 – Sponsor: Arc Studio Pro
00:37:56 – JOHN WICK 4
00:43:16 – › Rules as the engine of satisfying action scenes
00:47:14 – › Scene breakdown: the Osaka Continental negotiation
00:56:14 – › Scene breakdown: poker table reveals who can break the rules
01:00:07 – › The staircase duel and adhering to rules as victory strategy
01:04:04 – › Scene breakdown: the church as a game of seeking peace
01:14:34 – Wrap Up & Key Learnings
01:17:41 – › Win conditions, character decisions, and the GOAT framework
01:22:17 – Many thanks to our Patreons
FILMS
JOHN WICK: CHAPTER 4 (2023) — (w) Shay Hatten, Michael Finch (d) Chad Stahelski
SHOWS
BLUEY 2x37 — (w) Joe Brumm
BLUEY 3x16 "Phones" — Joe Brumm (w)
SCRIPTS
Study the script: JOHN WICK: CHAPTER 4 (2023) — Shay Hatten, Michael Finch
LINKS
Read: Shot Zero on Game Night's Hot Potato Sequence
EPISODES IN THE GAME OF THE SCENE SERIES
DZ-102: Game of the Scene - Bluey, John Wick 4
DZ-103: Game of the Scene 2 - Triangle of Sadness, The Favourite
RELATED EPISODES
DZ-40: Tactics and Scenes
DZ-99: Scene Questions
DZ-100: Scenes through Swords
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