
Show Notes
Listen how the separation of choice, decision, and consequence (for a character) creates emotional impact.
In order to better understand dramatising of character, Chas and Stu take a very draft zero look at very specific tool: choices and decisions. We analyse three films through the decisions made by their characters. In particular, how the audience understanding of: the choice available, the considered decision itself, and the consequence changes how we feel about these characters. And how separating those three things can create different emotional effects on your audience.
We debate this in the episode, but this is the terminology we settle on:
CHOICE: Are the options presented to the character.
DECISION: Is the knowing consideration of the choice and resulting action.
CONSEQUENCE: is the resulting outcome from the choice.
Part 1 (this part) establishes what we mean by choice and decision, and then takes a deep dive into BOOKSMART, directed by Olivia Wilde, and written by Emily Halpern, Sarah Haskins and Susanna Fogel. We all discuss FLEABAG, SEVEN, and old favourite, Star Wars.
Part 2 will turn our analytical eye on THE FAREWELL and WRATH OF MAN.
Thanks to Chris for editing this episodes.
As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.
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CHAPTERS
00:00:00 – Introduction
00:01:36 – Choices vs Decisions
00:19:51 – Booksmart
01:01:41 – Decisions & Structure
01:05:50 – Mills' decision in Se7en
01:07:50 – Key Learnings and Wrap Up
FILMS
BOOKSMART (2019) — (w) Sarah Haskins, Emily Halpern, Katie Silberman, Susanna Fogel (d) Olivia Wilde
SE7EN (1995) — (w) Andrew Kevin Walker (d) David Fincher
STAR WARS (1977) — (w) George Lucas
THE FAREWELL (2019) — (w) Lulu Wang
WRATH OF MAN (2021) — (w) Ivan Atkinson, Marn Davies, Guy Ritchie (d) Guy Ritchie
SHOWS
FLEABAG — (w) Phoebe Waller Bridge
SCRIPTS
Study the script: BOOKSMART (2019) — Sarah Haskins, Emily Halpern, Katie Silberman, Susanna Fogel
Study the script: SE7EN (1995) — Andrew Kevin Walker
Study the script: THE FAREWELL (2019) — Lulu Wang
SHOT ZERO DEEP DIVES
Editing as Imperfect Memory in THE FAREWELL
EPISODES IN THE CHOICES AND DECISIONS SERIES
DZ-84: Choices & Decisions 1 - Booksmart
DZ-85: Choices & Decisions 2 - The Farewell & Wrath of Man
RELATED EPISODES
DZ-34: Game of Choices - Decision Making and Character Implications
DZ-48: One-Shot - Blade Runner 2049 – Agency vs Choice
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